Talk:Barbara Turner (screenwriter)

Latest comment: 5 years ago by 92.21.14.94 in topic Tawtollogee

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Article: "Her father was an Austrian Jewish immigrant, and her mother was born in New York, to Austrian Jewish parents.[4]"
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Article: "Her parents were both from Austrian Jewish families;"
Didn't you just say that?
Article: "her father was an immigrant,"
Didn't you just say that?
Article: "as were her maternal grandparents.[4][5]"
Didn't you just say that, given that her mother was born in New York to Austrian Jewish parents as opposed to Austrian-American Jewish parents?
92.21.14.94 (talk) 23:51, 5 April 2019 (UTC)Reply