Talk:Battle of Babylon Hill
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Djmaschek in topic B class review comment
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B class review comment
editI have two comments. Djmaschek (talk) 01:21, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- When you write a battle article, please edit the associated campaignbox template and add the battle name (in this case: Template:Campaignbox First English Civil War). This time I did it for you.
- In the introduction, it says Hopton was almost captured, but I don't see this in the narrative. This information and citation should probably be in the narrative. I'm not sure in what part of the skirmish this happened. Once it's in the narrative, it does not need a citation in the introduction.