Talk:Battle of Babylon Hill/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Harrias in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: (Just in case you'd forgotten about this.) Harrias talk 10:09, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK
- Images properly licensed
- "nominal" victory rather than "notional"
- were carrying out reconnaissance passive voice "reconnoitering"
- Link Somerset, musketeer, dragoon, artillery on first use
- were able to pull back
from the hillunder the cover - town itself but were unable comma after "itself"
- defence on Yeovil Bridge, over the River Yeo, a combination of infantry and artillery awkward
- I have rephrased to "Bedford had posted a guard, consisting of both infantry and artillery, on Yeovil Bridge, which spanned the River Yeo." Harrias talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
- Before the
entirefoot >Before all of the foot - amongst Moreton's men
too"as well" - Which son of William Balfour?
- None of the sources say. Harrias talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
- lost five, and the Royalists around 20 MOS says that spelling needs to be consistent for quantities of the same things, overriding the normal requirement about spelling numbers below ten
- No need to link publisher locations--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:32, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for your review; I have edited the article to account for each of your points, and have addressed a couple directly above. Harrias talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)