Talk:Battle of Sembabule/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 10:28, 26 September 2019 (UTC)

• Why is Uganda linked while Tanzania isn't in the lead?
  • Both now linked
• Tanzania had repulsed a Ugandan invasion in late 1978 Link the invasion.
  • Done.
• coup that overthrew the President of Uganda, Milton Obote Link President of Uganda.
  • Done.
• Remove the second "however", two "however"'s are maybe a little bit too much in a short article like this one.
  • Done.
• Is there a link for both "Tiger Regiment"s in the lead and body?
  • No, and there's very little information about this unit.
• Same as above for 205th Brigade.
  • Same as above.
• whereby the the 205th Brigade would maneuver as an entire American maneuver.
  • Anglicanised.
• The brigade met Ugandan resistance at Sembabule, marking the beginning of a three week-long battle Little bit wordy here. So the brigade met the exiles but the exiles didn't fight in the battle? Also "three week-long" needs a hyphen.
  • Revised.
• The the 205th Brigade encountered double "the".
  • Fixed.
• whereby the the 205th Brigade would maneuver Again double "the".
  • Fixed.
• Regiment at Sembabule, beginning a three week-long battle Again "three week-long".
  • Fixed.

Infobox

• Maybe add "early" before March?
  • Well it could have been early or mid March, I'm not really sure.
• Maybe change the tilde into "c." in the infobox?
  • Done.
• "5 April 1979" --> "5/6 April 1979" Because we do not know which source is correct.
  • Done.

Images

• There are none.

Sources

• Lubega's source hasn't an access-date?
  • Added.
• "War in Uganda: The Legacy of Idi Amin" Doesn't need a Google Books URL.
  • Removed.
• Shouldn't Thomas' source have an access-date?
  • Added.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 10:28, 26 September 2019 (UTC)

@CPA-5: I've responded to your comments. -Indy beetle (talk) 23:10, 26 September 2019 (UTC)

• Looks good to me. I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 09:54, 29 September 2019 (UTC)