Talk:Bellevue City Hall/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:11, 15 August 2017 (UTC)Reply


  • Lead is a little brief, in particular the second para, I don't think two sentences is really a paragraph...
    •  Y Expanded both paragraphs a bit.
  • You could create 450 Bell Terrace as a redirect if it really was a former name.
    •  Y Done.
  • "incorporation" is piped to a redirect.
    •  Y Fixed.
  • Shades of overlinking, e.g. "schoolhouse", "hardware store", "air conditioning", "basketball", "car dealership" etc...
    •  Y Fixed.
  • 11 floors in the infobox but as far as I can tell, only 9 stories mentioned in the prose. Did the renovation add two more floors?
    •  Y Fixed, it's actually seven floors, which were reduced from the original nine in the Qwest configuration.
  • "a "hub of civic life"" quote needs ref/attribution.
    •  Y Added.
  • EnergyStar is simply Energy Star.
    •  Y Fixed.
  • Could find an appropriate sub-cat of Category:Buildings and structures by year of completion.
    •  Y Added.

Otherwise not much more to add, a nice piece of work. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:27, 15 August 2017 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man: I believe that addresses everything in your review. SounderBruce 23:35, 15 August 2017 (UTC)Reply
Good work, it was very close before your modifications, and I've now passed it. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:32, 16 August 2017 (UTC)Reply