Talk:Benjamin Schulte/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

General

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  • All mentions of events such as 50 m and 100 m, 400 m would be better off spelt out as 50 meters for example

Lead

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Done Kees08 (Talk)

Early life and education

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Olympic career

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  • "Schulte decided to refocus and switch from long distance swimming to short distance. " - link long distance swimming
  • "Schulte broke his own national record during the" - wikilink national record to List of Guamanian records in swimming
  • The wikilink for the 2016 Summer Olympics should be at the start of the first sentence of the third paragraph and not at the end of it

International career

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  • "with a time of 29.26 to win the gold medal." - 29.26 seconds

Overall a neater piece of work than the other two articles I've reviewed. Just the quibbles above will need addressing. MWright96 (talk) 12:04, 14 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: Done with the comments, let me know if you have more. Thanks! Kees08 (Talk) 06:52, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Reply