Talk:Boston Strong

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Dick Kimball in topic Proofreading

Proofreading

edit
In late May, a concert, Boston Strong: An Evening of Support and Celebration, was performed
at TD Garden with performances by Aerosmith, James Taylor, New Kids on the Block(comma)
J. Geils Band, Boston, Godsmack, Extreme, Jason Aldean, Jimmy Buffett, Carole King,
Dane Cook and Steven Wright performed at the concert.

It looks like a redundancy needs editing and the New Kids need a comma. The first "performed" might be changed to "held" or "put on" to reduce repetition further. Dick Kimball (talk) 11:58, 15 April 2014 (UTC)Reply