Talk:British Honduras at the 1972 Summer Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 20:23, 30 November 2018 (UTC)Reply


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I will review this one now. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:23, 30 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

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  • Flag bearer? Also in infobox?
  • "The territory made its debut in Olympic competition later that year at the 1968 Summer Olympics, and except for the boycotted 1980 Summer Olympics have appeared in every Summer Olympiad since." - I don't believe you need the comma. Also, "have" should be "has" ("The territory has").
  • "This made Munich the second appearance for the then British territory, that would not become independent from the United Kingdom until 1981." - the two parts of the sentence aren't really related. If you do keep it as one sentence, "which" would be better than "that".
  • "The 1972 Summer Olympics were held from 26 August to 11 September 1976, a total of 7,134 athletes..." - the comma should be a semi-colon. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:32, 30 November 2018 (UTC)Reply
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