Talk:Cafe FX

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Skeletor3000 in topic General cleanup and overhaul for tone

Press Release?

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The last line of the opening paragraph, "With a focus on both live action and animated projects, Sententia is poised to capitalize on years of experience in the feature film market while developing a catalog of properties utilizing the proven strengths of sister companies CafeFX and The Syndicate.[1]", feels like it was written by someone at Sententia Entertainment. Maxplanar (talk) 03:45, 5 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

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General cleanup and overhaul for tone

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I've just finished a minor overhaul on this article. The tone was highly promotional, and most of my edits served to address that issue. I believe it's been resolved now and have removed the peacock template. If you disagree with this decision, please discuss here. I also did general grammatical/spelling cleanup while I was at it. I then added the Refimprove template, as the article is barely sourced. I should also mention that I removed a reference pointing to CafeFX's now-defunct website.

Thanks! Skeletor3000 (talk) 18:20, 12 November 2019 (UTC)Reply