Talk:Caitlin Van Sickle/GA1
Latest comment: 4 hours ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:15, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:32, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Added a cat.
- "She played at the collegiate level for the North Carolina Tar Heels from 2009 to 2012" in lead, change to "She played field hockey at the collegiate level for the North Carolina Tar Heels from 2009 to 2012"
- Done.
- "Caitlin Van Sickle during the 2019 FIH" Remove first name from caption.
- Done.
- "Van Sickle made the varsity squad" link varsity
- Done.
- "Van Sickle, a midfielder, recorded 10 goals" Is there a link for midfielder.
- There actually isn't – field hockey isn't covered all that well at Wikipedia.
- "penalty corner inserter" I have no idea what that means, lol.
- To be honest, I don't know either. It sounded important; that's why I included it lol. Should I do anything about it?
- Probably should. A note at the very least. (looks like there's an article for Penalty corner) ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:24, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Should I link the article? Any idea on what I'd say in the note? BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:44, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not sure. You'll have to find out what penalty corner inserter means first. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:49, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- Found something explaining it and added a note @WikiOriginal-9: – does that work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:07, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not sure. You'll have to find out what penalty corner inserter means first. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:49, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Should I link the article? Any idea on what I'd say in the note? BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:44, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- Probably should. A note at the very least. (looks like there's an article for Penalty corner) ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:24, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- To be honest, I don't know either. It sounded important; that's why I included it lol. Should I do anything about it?
- "She has also served as a coach at" remove has
- Removed.
- Overall, this article reads well. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:32, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:22, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good now. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:46, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:22, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
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