Talk:Carel Victor Gerritsen/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:52, 4 September 2021 (UTC)Reply


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  • Can we link open government?
Linked.
  • No link for "Neo-Malthusian League"?
There is no article so I have added a redlink.
  • "in Amersfoort, the" link.
Done.
  • "Dutch Reformed Church" link?
Done.
Done.
  • "Although Gerritsen probably never" Although he probably...
Done.
  • "he was influenced by his ideas" -> "Gerritsen was influenced"
Done.
  • "named De Dageraad, in 1882." sentence is unref.
Added.
  • "Young Amsterdam" not notable enough for a link?
There is no article. Do you think I should add a redlink?
If you think it could host an article, then I have no problem at all with red links. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Gerritsen's wife Aletta Jacobs ..." normally use upright on this kind of image.
Amended.
Good idea. Wikilink added.
  • Ref 15 should be pp.
Fixed.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:21, 5 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my amends and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 07:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
Red link issue aside, happy to promote. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)Reply