Talk:Carl Segerståhl

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To do: incorporate material from Västerbottens Museum: https://www.yumpu.com/sv/document/read/20022961/hundra-ars-lararutbildning-i-umea-vasterbottens-museum Lundström, Anders (1979). "Carl Segerståhl och Degefors-bygden". Västerbotten (3). Västerbottens Museum: 200–205. Retrieved 2023-11-21 – via Yumpu.  Frzzl  talk; contribs  23:10, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 18:42, 8 January 2024 (UTC)

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• ... that instead of paying homage to the visiting King Gustaf VI Adolf, Swedish headmaster Carl Segerståhl took his students swimming? Source: Skott, Fredrik (2008). Folkets minnen: traditionsinsamling i idé och praktik 1919-1964 (PDF) (Thesis) (in Swedish). Göteborg: Institutet för språk och folkminnen i samarbete med Göteborgs universitet. p. 53. ISBN 9789172290495.
  • ALT1: ... that instead of paying homage to a visiting King Gustaf VI Adolf, Swedish headmaster Carl Segerståhl took his students swimming in a nearby lake? Source: Ibid.
  • ALT1a ... that instead of paying homage to a visiting King, Swedish headmaster Carl Segerståhl took his students swimming in a nearby lake? Source: Ibid.
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Larry Nagler
  • Comment: Maybe it's better to include the bit about the lake, maybe not.

Created by Frzzl (talk). Self-nominated at 21:32, 25 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Carl Segerståhl; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Nominated five days after expansion, good length, well cited, I did a spot check of the hook fact in the article and at least using deepL.com to translate the source it does not seem like a close phrasing, but I cannot read Swedish (only German), but assuming good faith on foreign language source covers this. The hook seems interesting to me, it caught my attention. Of the two I think that ALT1 is slightly better, but they're both good. Unless someone who reads Swedish says I've got this wrong I think we're good to go. Good job on your article @Frzzl. 🌿MtBotany (talk) 19:42, 4 January 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I concur that ALT1's better; I've removed the mention of Adolf just because it's superfluous and will detract from the bolded article.  Frzzl  talk; contribs  14:54, 8 January 2024 (UTC)

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Carl Segerståhl/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Frzzl (talk · contribs) 21:30, 29 January 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 04:39, 23 May 2024 (UTC)

I will review this. The user is on wikibreak until 27 June so I will wait until closer to then while I review other GANs. :) Template:LunaEatsTunaSig (talk), posted at 04:39, 23 May 2024 (UTC)

@LunaEatsTuna, this is just a ping to remind you to get on this, now that we've hit June 27. -- asilvering (talk) 01:29, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Thanks. ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 18:29, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

Sorry for the wait! I am now happy to pass this fantastic article for GA status. Nice work, and congrats! ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 23:57, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

Review

Career

• This is a tiny irrelevant thingy but I would start § Background with his full name since the lead technically summarises the body of the article (so this should be mentioned) + I looked through some other GA and FA biographies and this seems to be the standard.
• Wikilink Östergötland.
  • Done x2 - F
• "he worked for the cultural archives of Lund" – the university or le city? If this is the university, I would rephrase to avoid mentioning it twice in such close succession, maybe "In the 1920s, while studying at Lund, he worked for their cultural archives under folklorist …".
  • Other source gave the name of the archives, made more specific. - F
• Replace the en dash with a semicolon (;) as it is more standard in this context.
• "where he worked until his death, as a teacher from 1929 to 1948, and as rector thereafter" – how about "where he worked until his death; as a teacher from 1929 to 1948, and as rector thereafter" to improve the sentence flow?
• I would do "At Vindeln, Segerståhl initiated the university's journal, Vindeln, and spread it towards other villages in Degerfors and several parishes in Västerbotten" for better clarity and flow, like clear water.
  • Changed, and replaced with both of your suggestions - you sure have a gift for copyediting! - F

Personal life

• Because the sentence is quite long and convoluted, I would cut it as "… Segerståhl was a proponent for the introduction of international auxiliary languages. He published a book entitled …" to make it more digestible.
  • Split - F
• One of the article's categories seems to imply that he could speak Occidental, but the article says he merely supported its introduction/admired it. Do any of the sources say whether or not he knew the language? If so, this should be mentioned in the article.
  • The article also says that he taught the language, which I thought would be okay; my secondary sources just say that he supported it. If you like, I could change it to Category:Interlingue? - F

Spotchecks

All good!

• Authorship: good, nominator wrote 94 percent of article
• Copyvio: Earwig says none detected
• Sources: good, passes spotchecks I did

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.