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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 18 January 2021 and 27 April 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): KAPEWOO23.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 20 August 2019 and 6 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): LizbethAcevedo21. Peer reviewers: Kvanhoutengudger21, Woosterstudent2000, Denali Hart.

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Veneered ?

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The picture caption says that she is veneered (originally venered)! She not a piece of furniture! I guess they meant venerated - but that sounds too religious to me. I'll make it revered. -- Beardo 20:42, 2 December 2006 (UTC)Reply

She was Fidel's wife

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I think it is a little over the top in terms of formality to put "rumoured to be lovers". Every single Cuban knows, and it is no state secret, that she was Castro's wife, also his secretary. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rasmus Sonderriis (talkcontribs) 20:53, 21 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

She was the founder of the 26th of July Movement in Manzanillo. ad formed.

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Not sure what the second part of this was meant to be. Fotoguzzi (talk) 02:54, 3 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

Possible Edits to the Article

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LizbethAcevedo21 (talk) 05:25, 18 October 2019 (UTC) Some of the edits that I would like to add are mostly towards the expansion of her early life as well as her contributions towards the Cuban Revolution, which involved her close relationship with Fidel Castro and other women. I feel that most of the article undervalues her accomplishments and the amount of danger she put herself through in order to see a successful Cuba. I think I also suggest omitting the possible rumor of her being Castro's lover/wife since it diminishes her actual role within the Cuban government. I would keep the legacy section since it demonstrates Castro's and the country's appreciation for her hard work. The biography, in general, needs more information since it barely touches what she did and continued to do after the revolution. I would also edit the articles chosen as some are repeated. Below are some of the book chapter/journal articles that mention a bit more about her early life as a child and her revolutionary contribution throughout her life.Reply

Article: 1. ANDAYA, ELISE. “Producing the New Woman:” In Conceiving Cuba, 24–45. Reproduction, Women, and the State in the Post-Soviet Era. Rutgers University Press, 2014. http://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt6wq9z3.5. 2. Becker, Marc. Twentieth-Century Latin American Revolutions. Latin American Perspectives in the Classroom. Lanham, MD Boulder New York London: Rowman & Littlefield, 2017. 3. Maloof, Judy, ed. “Women and the Cuban Revolution.” In Voices of Resistance, 1st ed., 21–40. Testimonies of Cuban and Chilean Women. University Press of Kentucky, 1999. http://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt130hvk0.6. 4. STOUT, NANCY. One Day in December. NYU Press, 2013. http://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt155jm45. 5. THOMAS-WOODARD, TIFFANY A. “‘Towards the Gates of Eternity’: Celia Sánchez Manduley and the Creation of Cuba’s New Woman.” Cuban Studies 34 (2003): 154–80. 6. Treviño, A. Javier. “Recorded Interviews with Cuban Citizens.” In C. Wright Mills and the Cuban Revolution, 76–108. An Exercise in the Art of Sociological Imagination. University of North Carolina Press, 2017. http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.5149/9781469633114_trevino.10.

Re: Possible Edits

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From reading your proposed edits, I feel that your included sources and newfound emphasis on her contributions to the Revolution and her influence on policy on post-Batista Cuba. The article undeniably suffers from its focus on the broader Revolution and her ties to Castro rather than Sánchez herself. I might recommend pulling from the Spanish language article on her, as it's far more detailed than the English counterpart in several places, though considering I'm not familiar with how well-versed you are in Spanish, this might be an unfair suggestion for me to make. My only real gripe is with the early life section mentioning her neurosis twice. The content you added is very good but it could benefit from more concise language. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kvanhoutengudger21 (talkcontribs) 22:17, 22 October 2019 (UTC)Reply

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Participate in the deletion discussion at the nomination page. —Community Tech bot (talk) 07:08, 31 August 2021 (UTC)Reply