Talk:Chacal-class destroyer/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 14:07, 2 February 2016 (UTC)

• "The primary role of the larger contre-torpilleur was scouting with battleline defense secondary and attacking the enemy battleline in third place." - this reads awkwardly and took a couple of tries to parse. Part of the problem is non-parallel structure (i.e., you have a list of gerund, noun, gerund)
• "all weathers" - I think you can ditch the "s"
• "The former was sunk the next day off Dunkirk and the latter" - former and latter only work when discussing 2 things - you have 3 destroyers mentioned here.
• "They were turned her over" - something's wrong here
• link rate of fire
• One dupe link
• Hide the dab for U-136
  • All done, see how the changes work for you. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:08, 3 February 2016 (UTC)