Talk:Christine Nelson

Christine Nelson has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: May 28, 2021. (Reviewed version).

Christine Nelson (final version) received a peer review by Wikipedia editors, which on 25 August 2021 was archived. It may contain ideas you can use to improve this article.

Television: Degrassi Low‑importance

	Television portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Television, a collaborative effort to develop and improve Wikipedia articles about television programs. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page where you can join the discussion. To improve this article, please refer to the style guidelines for the type of work.TelevisionWikipedia:WikiProject TelevisionTemplate:WikiProject Televisiontelevision articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	This article is supported by the Degrassi task force (assessed as Mid-importance).

Canada Low‑importance

	Canada portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Canada, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Canada on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.CanadaWikipedia:WikiProject CanadaTemplate:WikiProject CanadaCanada-related articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Fictional characters

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Fictional characters, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of fictional characters on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Fictional charactersWikipedia:WikiProject Fictional charactersTemplate:WikiProject Fictional charactersfictional character articles

Women

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Women, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of women on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.WomenWikipedia:WikiProject WomenTemplate:WikiProject WomenWikiProject Women articles

GA Review

Latest comment: 3 years ago9 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:Christine Nelson/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

Try shrinking the lead to three paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH.
Remove the comma after "first episode of Degrassi Junior High"
It's Late → "It's Late" (all uses)
That's about it here.
- All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:24, 28 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Concept and casting

Is the hyphen necessary between "provocatively-dressed"?
"Of the filming" doesn't sound right. Maybe change "Of" to "On" or "During".
- All fixed - I've made it "Speaking of the filming". to make it more clear. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:26, 28 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Characterization

"father may had" → "father may have"
- Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:27, 28 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Role in Degrassi

Except for the one in #The_Next_Generation, are the TV screenshots needed?
Remove the comma after "were a baby".
There's a word missing between "by parents".
"withhold a payment" → "withhold payment"
Is "day care" two words in British English?
"which Spike responds" → "to which Spike responds"
- All fixed. I also just put "daycare" as one word. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Novelization

"based from" doesn't sound right.
Remove the comma after "support her daughter".
- Both fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Reception and impact

"story line" → "storyline" (all uses)
"14 year-old" → "14-year-old"
Remove the comma after "pregnant in real life".
"for the Planned Parenthood" → "for Planned Parenthood"
- All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

References

The main sections #Episodes and #Sources do not seem necessary. I would merge them all here into subsections as:

==References==

===Citations===

===Episodes===

===Sources===

Done. I didn't think of making subsections! ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
· · ·

Add topic