Talk:Chuck Versus Agent X

Osama

The coincidence is too good not be noted. But should it go under reception or cultural references? --Boycool (talk) 21:42, 5 May 2011 (UTC)

Cultural references would probably be the better place for it to be noted Ambaryer (talk) 21:44, 5 May 2011 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Chuck Versus Agent X/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 01:35, 13 June 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• The talkpage needs Wikiprojects
  • Done.
• The plot section is largely confusing to me (a non-Chuck watcher). Not sure if this can be fixed enough for non-viewers to comprehend, but I recommend giving it a slight rewrite
  • The episode itself was largely confusing, even for a hardcore viewer like me, but the summary is not quite chronological, especially in the first few paragraphs. It's only 372 or so words, so I'll work on it later.
    • I edited the plot and I think it's just about as detailed as it can get to be clear to non-Chuck viewers without going over on detail (or word count).
• In the lead you say a character "makes a life-changing discovery" from a laptop, but the plot is unclear on this (it just says "spy will")
  • I tweaked the plot summary in the lead, because it wasn't true to the episode's actual plot.
• Indicate Jeffster! is a band
  • Done
• Too many "also"s and "revealed"s in production
  • I removed an "also" and changed a few "revealed"s. Tell me if there are still too many.
• I recommend combining music and cultural ref sections (combine under "Music and cultural references" heading)
  • Done.
• Websites are not italicize (i.e. TV by the Numbers (add wikilink also)). Also, Den of Geek is three words.
  • Done.
• Sentences ending in quotes need a citation directly after period (mostly in reception section)
  • Done.
• Ref 9 needs accessdate
  • Done; I was missing a bit of code in the ref.
• Either italicize all Chucks and other TV shows in ref titles, or none of them
  • The only "Chuck"s italicized are the ones that were italicized in the titles of the original websites.

• I recommend still italicizing all of them for consistency's sake (see Lost episodes for examples, if needed) Ruby2010 comment! 15:07, 13 June 2011 (UTC)

• • • Done. --Boycool (talk) 20:54, 13 June 2011 (UTC)

I'll place the review on hold for seven days while everything gets sorted. Please reply here when your edits are finished, as I will not be watching the article page. Thanks and good luck, Ruby2010 comment! 02:30, 13 June 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Pass for GA. Nice work, Ruby2010 comment! 03:13, 14 June 2011 (UTC)

Thanks you very much! --Boycool (talk) 14:07, 14 June 2011 (UTC)

The picture

that picture of Dalton with the tag "the identity of Agent X is revealed" is a HUGE spoiler, isn't it? what if I looked at it before I watched the episode? not good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.92.203.218 (talk) 21:51, 29 December 2011 (UTC)

It's pretty simple: If you don't want spoilers, don't read an article about an episode you haven't watched. It's not the job of Wikipedia to limit spoilers. So long as an episode has either aired, or the information is supported by a referenced source, it's legitimate to add. Ambaryer (talk) 21:56, 29 December 2011 (UTC)

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