Talk:Clare Grady

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Innisfree987 in topic Comment

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Following up on a conversation about this article, I made some edits, added a bit of information for context, and added to the introduction. There was one problem statement about pouring blood, hammering, etc. It would be good if someone could check that I interpreted what was meant to be said correctly where verbs were missing in this edit.

It would be nice to have a little more background about what the nature of the concern that drove the protests. And any other information that might state what specifically was done by Grady, anything specific about what motivates here, etc., if possible.–CaroleHenson (talk) 05:09, 14 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

I checked the edit—definitely an improvement, thank you (as well for your other expansions to the entry.) Innisfree987 (talk) 10:38, 14 March 2021 (UTC)Reply