Talk:Color Force

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Spintendo in topic Lead Paragraph

Requested move 28 April 2017

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The result of the move request was: page moved. wbm1058 (talk) 17:39, 6 May 2017 (UTC)Reply



Color Force (company)Color Force – While "color force" is a term related to quantum chromodynamics, it does not appear at all in that article. Furthermore, independent sources show that it is written in lowercase, so here the film company can be at Color Force without disambiguation per WP:DIFFCAPS. Erik (talk | contrib) (ping me) 15:07, 28 April 2017 (UTC)Reply


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Erik, yes I would have supported the move had it been necessary, or had I seen your question in time... but that's academic now, there was strong consensus to move even without me, as I expected. And I was glad to remain uninvolved as this is an excellent example of disambiguation using capitalisation as a small difference, which is a long-term hobbyhorse of mine. Andrewa (talk) 00:16, 7 May 2017 (UTC)Reply

Key People

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I work for Rubenstein and on behalf of Color Force, I'm requesting the addition of Brad Simpson, Partner to the list of Key People in the infobox. Brad Simpson joined Color Force as Partner in 2012. [1] The company is often described in media as "Nina Jacobson and Brad Simpson’s Color Force". [2]

Partner
Brad Simpson

NinaSpezz (talk) 14:40, 30 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Reply 30-OCT-2018

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   Edit request partially implemented  

  1.  Y Simpson was added to the infobox. Bryan Unkeless was also added.

 Spintendo  20:01, 30 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Spintendo: Thank you. Please remove Bryan Unkeless as he is no longer with Color Force. [3] NinaSpezz (talk) 20:06, 30 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
@NinaSpezz:  Done  Spintendo  00:31, 31 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Lead Paragraph

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I work for Rubenstein and on behalf of Color Force, I'm requesting the addition of the following sentence after the first sentence in the lead paragraph (Color Force is an American studio...).

In 2012, producer Brad Simpson joined as partner, focusing on expanding the company's production and development slate, and talent relations. [4]

NinaSpezz (talk) 14:04, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

  Done  Spintendo  14:36, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Spintendo: Thank you. I could use an explanation as to why the full sentence was not added as requested. Also, to say Simpson "became" partner may falsely imply there was a promotion. Rather, Simpson joined that year and I believe adding "producer" adds some context to his role. NinaSpezz (talk) 14:52, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Reply
  1. The phrase "expanding the company's development slate" is, in essence, the same idiomatic expression used in the source. To use another idiom: there's not much room left to maneuver in edit requests disregarding WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE.
  2. The term "talent relations" as a pronoun gives the reader limited information. Perhaps Jacobsen felt Simpson offered a better line of communication to clients than she was prepared to offer, and that was why Simpson's work is roughly described as "and talent relations". Nevertheless, these types of assigned roles really don't require delineation in a smaller firm such as this. Suffice it to say that the role of one partner is to limit the deficiencies expressed in the other partner by doing well, that which the other does poorly, or does not wish to do at all. For such is the logic of partnerships — where for, whatever myriad of reasons, two heads are better than one.[a]  Spintendo  03:21, 8 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Notes

  1. ^ The purpose of attaining a partner is to either replace, augment or compliment one person's abilities, connections, set of experiences, insights or finances with the partner's collection of any or all of those same items. Their partnership then allows the combined strengths of the individuals into one powerhouse which is able to accomplish much more than either of the partners could on their own. All of that is a given. So to describe Simpson as a partner already denotes many of Simpson's abilities in the minds of readers. Thus an additional description of what Simpson does as a partner might be superfluous and unecessary in getting the point across on what it is that they do. I hope that better explains things.