Talk:Coming Up to Breathe/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by AJona1992 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 03:47, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- Coming Up to Breathe is the fifth major label, full-length studio album from MercyMe.
- Released in on April 25, 2006,
- Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews from critics
- "Something Like You" has been compared to the sound of U2 (particularly the song "Where The Streets Have No Name"),[6] while "3:42 a.m. (Writer's Block)" has been described as 'soulful classic rock'
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- "Background" has basically every period cited with FN#1 which makes the article look even more clumsy
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Saying "Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews." is being biased
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Active users have been reverting vandalism, which was last done back in mid November 2011
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- File:Mercyme cutb.jpg does not comply with WP:NFCC; its rational is very very weak and does not give a suitable reasoning on why a non-free artwork gives any educational value. The second file completely fails WP:NFCC.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- I suggest you fixed all of these concerns, get it copy edited, allow others to give it a WP:PR and then re-nominate at a later date. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 23:23, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: