Talk:Coming Up to Breathe/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• For the "Recorded" section, show what year it was recorded followed by a semicolon and a list of studios where it was recorded (Ex: 2009; Studio 1, Studio 2)
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
• Singles do not need to be sourced in the infobox because they have their own respective articles
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Lead

• Released on April 25, 2006... → "Released on April 25, 2006 by INO Records..."
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Background

• No issues

Composition

• Two subsections not necessary in this context
  • Done Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

• No issues

Singles

• An album cut from the album, "No More No Less", spent one frame on the Hot Christian Songs chart, debuting and peaking at number thirty..[31] → Get rid of extra period at end of statement
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Release

• Replace all of the "No."s with "number"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Track listing

• No issues

Personnel

• No issues

Charts and certifications

• No issues

References

• If you mention a work or publisher in a reference and it is wiki-linked, do not wiki-link it for further references
• Only italicize publications in the "work=" parameter
• Proofread all of these to ensure errors are not made; for a guideline to follow, use WP:REFERENCE
  • Fixed all. Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are a few prose issues, and things mostly just need to be proofread in the references section for this article to pass. I will give you the general seven days to fix mistakes, address points I have made, and/or ask me any questions that you have. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 18:35, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

All issues have now been addressed, so I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work you are doing! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 01:46, 22 June 2012 (UTC)