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editI will be paid by The Writers for Hire to edit the Convoy of Hope article. BeenAroundAWhile (talk) 05:40, 8 April 2015 (UTC)
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Aid to Ukraine!
editI want to know when you are sending aid to Ukraine. I want to donate! 2001:5B0:280E:83B8:25EC:E577:92D5:8B42 (talk) 14:26, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
- We are currently sending supplies to Ukraine! You can follow our response and make a donation here: https://convoyofhope.org/relief-for-ukraine/ Convoy-nick (talk) 16:08, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
Donation boxes
editJust wondering how to report when your donation boxes are full and need emptied 2600:100A:B110:4266:95EA:105F:8DDF:C10E (talk) 21:32, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- Hi, 2600:100A:B110:4266:95EA:105F:8DDF:C10E –
- Convoy of Hope benefits from those clothing donation boxes — but we do not own or manage them. If you know of a particular box that needs attention, please email [email protected] with its address and we can pass the message to the company in charge of them. Thanks! Generalmills2002 (talk) 15:30, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
Edit Request
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- What I think should be changed: The Convoy of Hope logo used in the article is outdated and needs to be updated.
- Why it should be changed: The logo was changed over a decade ago. You can see the new logo on the website. [1]
- References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): You can see the new logo on the website [2] and it can be accessed here [3]
Generalmills2002 (talk) 19:20, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
References
Generalmills2002 (talk) 19:20, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- Question: Are you going to upload the file and voluntary waive copyright? Lightoil (talk) 08:57, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
- My apologies, but I don't know how to do that. But I'm happy to do that if you're able to tell me how it. Thanks! Generalmills2002 (talk) 13:08, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
- I have uploaded the logo. Here is the code to implement on the page.
This is the logo for the organization Convoy of Hope. - https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Convoy-of-Hope-Logo-2023.jpg Generalmills2002 (talk) 14:27, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
Edit Request
editThis edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
There is some information on our page that is either outdated, or incorrect as our programs have changed. Below is a list of each edit request, along with why something should be changed, and sources. Please let me know if I need to provide anything additional.
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1. We are a “faith based” organization. Can you add “Faith-Based” in the opening sentence — “Convoy of Hope is a faith-based nonprofit…” Source 1 Source 2
a. Change “As of 2019, the organization has provided a total of $1 billion in food and aid, helping over 115 million people in the process” to “As of 2023, the organization has provided a total of $2 billion in food and aid, helping over 200 million people in the process” Additional Source. b. The Wikipedia page lists our children’s feeding numbers from 2019 as 200,000 kids in 14 countries. Our numbers as of 2022 are over 500,000 kids in 33 countries. Source 1 Source 2 Source 3 c. This is an addition, so only add if you feel like it’s beneficial to the article, but since 1994, we’ve also served over 700 million meals. Source
a. “Convoy of Hope’s Agriculture initiative provides agricultural training and resources to help people break the cycles of poverty and hopelessness. Convoy’s agriculture specialists teach production methods that encourage long-term sustainable practices, like techniques on food storage, processing, and preservation. Since 2011, Convoy of Hope has trained more than 80,000 individuals in agriculture in 17 countries around the world.”
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Generalmills2002 (talk) 15:47, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
- Not done: 1. What does "faith-based" mean here? What is a reader intended to understand from this? It's very unclear and ambiguous. If CoH were reported as being "faith-based" consistently by reliable secondary sources, that could be included in the lead with an explanatory footnote, but this doesn't seem to be the case.
- 2. The association with Assemblies of God is relevant; why should it go unmentioned here?
- 3. Your suggestion looks good.
- 4.
- a. Since these numbers are sourced to an interview with CoH leadership, they should be attributed - "The organization claims to have provided...".
- b. Ok.
- c. Not reported in secondary sources, so both reliability and noteworthiness of this number are questionable; shouldn't be included.
- 5. Ok.
- 6. The initiative should be named as it is reported in reliable sources. If its name has been changed, that can be included at an appropriate point in the paragraph, but it shouldn't be changed everywhere without explanation.
- 7. The phrasing chosen by CoH is not relevant here; Wikipedia editors should actually avoid copying text without attribution (WP:COPYVIO). "Daily" could be changed to "on school days" for accuracy, but alignment with CoH promotional material is not appropriate. Please be aware that Wikipedia is not for advertisement or promotion.
- 8. External links in article text are inappropriate per WP:EL. Inclusion of content on Wikipedia is based on WP:NOTABILITY, not the desires or preferences of article subjects. Any addition should be based exclusively on reliable sources. The promotional tone and intent of your suggested addition is also not appropriate for Wikipedia.
- 9. I'm not a grammar expert, so I might be wrong, but I don't think a comma is needed there (?). This example sentence, with a location name that doesn't include a comma, reads perfectly fine to me:
- "In 1996, Hal Donaldson was offered a job in Canada and moved CoH's HQ there as well."
- On the other hand, it looks weird with a comma:
- "In 1996, Hal Donaldson was offered a job in Canada, and moved CoH's HQ there as well."
- I don't think "...and moved CoH's HQ there as well" should be separated from the rest of a sentence with a comma, if it can be at all.
- Remember that you are allowed to make minor edits to spelling and punctuation as long as they do not change the meaning of the content you edited. If you think a comma belongs there, be bold and put it there. Remember to include a short WP:PAID notice in your edit summary for transparency. Actualcpscm (talk) 16:11, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
- 1. You can gain insight on what a faith-based organization is by this Wikipedia article. The intent is that a reader would see “faith-based” and know that Convoy is an organization whose values are based on faith, which has a mission based on a particular faith, and which most often draws its activists (leaders, staff, volunteers) from a particular faith group.
- Here are some reliable secondary sources that report Convoy as faith-based. Source 1 Source 2 Source 3 Source 4
- 2. The way the sentence is currently written makes it appear that we are an entity of the Assemblies of God and Chi Alpha, which is incorrect. We would like the sentence to be more accurate – and you are welcome to write that sentence however you wish, and even keep Assemblies of God and Chi Alpha listed. Maybe, “and works with different denominations, churches, and organizations including the Assemblies of God and its Chi Alpha campus ministries and fellowships.”
- 3. If this suggestion is good, are you able to go ahead and make that change?
- 4. Can you make the changes you approved along with your recommendation to add the statement "The organization claims to have provided..."? I will work towards finding secondary sources that site our most recent numbers that you requested better sourcing and present those in a later edit request.
- 5. Can you please make this approved change?
- 6. Understood – I will wait until newer news articles state our initiative name correctly and then make a future edit request with those sources sited.
- 7. Understood. Our goal was to present more accurate information, but understand now that we can’t source ourselves. Here are additional sources that use this new “every school day” verbiage. But if this sources are insufficient, I will wait until additional news organizations mention this new phrasing and submit a future edit request. Source 1 Source 2 Source 3
- 8. Understood. I will wait until a news article covers our Agricultural initiatives and then submit a future edit request.
- 9. I’ll leave without the comma.
- Generalmills2002 (talk) 18:48, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
- Reopened request per Actualcpscm in case other editors are able to review before they are. Generalmills2002 (talk) 14:16, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
- {{paid}} Generalmills2002 (talk) 18:48, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
Reply 28-JUN-2023
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In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. |
Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo 03:22, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
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Edit Request
editThis edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
There is some information on our page that is either outdated, or incorrect as our programs have changed. Below is a list of each edit request, along with why something should be changed, and sources. Please let me know if I need to provide anything additional.
1. We are a “faith based” organization. Can you add “Faith-Based” in the opening sentence — “Convoy of Hope is a faith-based nonprofit…” You can gain insight on what a faith-based organization is by this Wikipedia article. The intent is that a reader would see “faith-based” and know that Convoy is an organization whose values are based on faith, which has a mission based on a particular faith, and which most often draws its activists (leaders, staff, volunteers) from a particular faith group.
Here are some reliable secondary sources that report Convoy as faith-based.
Convoy of Hope is a faith-based[1] nonprofit…
Convoy of Hope is a faith-based[2] nonprofit…
Convoy of Hope is a faith-based[3] nonprofit…
Convoy of Hope is a faith-based[4] nonprofit…
2. We work with organizations well beyond just the Assemblies of God and Chi Alpha. Can you change “is associated with the Assemblies of God and its Chi Alpha campus ministries and fellowships” to a sentence that better convey's this fact? The way the sentence is currently written makes it appear that we are an entity of the Assemblies of God and Chi Alpha, which is incorrect. We would like the sentence to be more accurate – and you are welcome to write that sentence however you wish, and even keep Assemblies of God and Chi Alpha listed.
Here is a copy option, or you can draft your own, “and works with different denominations, churches, and organizations including the Assemblies of God and its Chi Alpha campus ministries and fellowships.”
3. The statement “In 1995, Convoy of Hope held its first large food distribution event in which they gave 700,000 pounds of food to 70,000 people” is inaccurate. The way in which the article sourced for this information states these data points can be incorrectly read. The way it is written in the Wikipedia article makes it appear that Convoy gave 700,000 pounds of product to 70,000 people at a single event, when in reality that amount was given for the entire year of 1995. The sentence would be more accurate if it read, “In 1995, Convoy of Hope held its first large food distribution event. Over the course of the year, they gave 700,000 pounds of food to 70,000 people.[5]”
4. This Wikipedia article lists our numbers going back to 2019, so almost 4 years old. Change “As of 2019, the organization has provided a total of $1 billion in food and aid, helping over 115 million people in the process” to “As of 2022, the organization has provided a total of $2 billion in food and aid, helping over 200 million people in the process”[6].
5.Convoy is not a “first responder organization”, as mentioned in the Services section. A more accurate representation — that can use the same citation — is “One of its primary functions is as one of the first organizations to respond in the wake of disasters.”[7]
6. Our children’s feeding program doesn’t provide “daily” meals to children, so wording it that ways is inaccurate . We partner with schools to provide meals to children “every school day”. The way we phrase this statement is “Convoy of Hope also has a children's feeding program that provides regular, nutritious meals to children[8] in developing countries throughout the world.”
- ^ Karnes, Sara (October 4, 2022). "Here's what to know about Convoy of Hope". Springfield News-Leader.
- ^ Staff (September 26, 2022). "Groups bring hope to Gaston families". Gaston Gazette.
- ^ "Church in Sullivan, Ind., Helping with Recovery Effort after Tornado". Christian Standard. April 4, 2023.
- ^ Kirkland, Jordan (October 21, 2022). "State Farm donates $125,000 to Convoy of Hope's Hurricane Ian response". The Capitolist.
- ^ Temple, Christine (Feb 4, 2019). "Convoy of Hope marks 25 years of providing disaster relief and humanitarian aid on a global stage". Springfield Business Journal.
- ^ Morgan, Marya (November 18, 2022). "CLOSER LOOK: Convoy Of Hope Marks Billions In Relief (2022 Ministry Update)". KLove.
- ^ "Local store collecting donations for Hurricane Sandy victims". Redwood Times. 20 November 2012. Retrieved 13 February 2020.
- ^ "Convoy of Hope believes in sustainable solutions for a sustainable future". G20 Interfaith Forum. April 17, 2019.
Generalmills2002 (talk) 20:40, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
Reply 5-JUL-2023
editBelow you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request. Spintendo 00:42, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
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- Specific text to be added or removed: (Add to bottom of History section) As of 2024, the organization has distributed $2.5 billion in food, water, and supplies, and was the 35th-largest charity in the U.S., according to Forbes.
- Reason for the change: Updated stats, as the latest stats mentioned in the page are from 2019.
- References supporting change: https://news.ag.org/en/articles/news/2024/04/driven-by-compassion-convoy-of-hope-marks-30-years-of-growth-and-ministry and https://www.forbes.com/lists/top-charities/?sh=6b5d06095f50