Talk:County Route 168 (Sullivan County, New York)
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Rschen7754 in topic USRD GA audit
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GA Review
edit- This review is transcluded from Talk:County Route 168 (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Comments:
- Place a request for a shield of the route
- Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
- Replace "along the aqueduct" with "on Roebling's Delaware Aqueduct"
- In lead, do not need to indicate route is in Minisink Ford besides the first sentence
- In first sentence of route description, remove words from parentheses and place comma after "Aqueduct"
- Do not need Minisink Ford Road italicized
- "un-manned" should not be hyphenated
- Minisink Battleground Road does not need to be italicized either
- Replace "residential homes" with residences"
- Replace "After those few homes" with "Past the residential area"
- Clarify "keyed-access"
- This article is about CR 168. Is it nessecary to list too much information about the history of Minisink Battleground County Park?
- Try to find a little more history about the actual road itself
- Is the mileage for the NY 97 intersection known?
- In the major intersections table, I would suggest listing the NY 97 junction as either one entry with a notation indicating a short concurrency or as two entries indicating the western and eastern ends of the concurrency
I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 02:11, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
- Most done. As for the history, CR 168's only purpose is to serve the Park, and probably the reason for designation.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 20:25, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
USRD GA audit
editThis article has failed the USRD GA audit and will be sent to WP:GAR if the issues are not resolved within one week. Please see WT:USRD for more details, and please ask me if you have any questions as to why this article failed. --Rschen7754 (T C) 05:00, 5 April 2009 (UTC)