Talk:County Route 168 (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1

GA Review

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Comments:

1. Place a request for a shield of the route
2. Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
3. Replace "along the aqueduct" with "on Roebling's Delaware Aqueduct"
4. In lead, do not need to indicate route is in Minisink Ford besides the first sentence
5. In first sentence of route description, remove words from parentheses and place comma after "Aqueduct"
6. Do not need Minisink Ford Road italicized
7. "un-manned" should not be hyphenated
8. Minisink Battleground Road does not need to be italicized either
9. Replace "residential homes" with residences"
10. Replace "After those few homes" with "Past the residential area"
11. Clarify "keyed-access"
12. This article is about CR 168. Is it nessecary to list too much information about the history of Minisink Battleground County Park?
13. Try to find a little more history about the actual road itself
14. Is the mileage for the NY 97 intersection known?
15. In the major intersections table, I would suggest listing the NY 97 junction as either one entry with a notation indicating a short concurrency or as two entries indicating the western and eastern ends of the concurrency

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 02:11, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

Most done. As for the history, CR 168's only purpose is to serve the Park, and probably the reason for designation.Mitch32^{(Go Syracuse)} 20:25, 4 February 2009 (UTC)