Talk:Cu Lao Cham Marine Park

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Cu Lao Cham Marine Park/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 10:07, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

I propose reviewing this article which I see has been waiting nearly 8 months for review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:07, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

First reading

• The lead should be a summary of the main body of text. It should not contain anything that is not dealt with below, and should not there fore need any citations because everything should be sourced in the main text.
• In the Topography section, you first give the names of the islands and their English equivalents, and that's fine. The second paragraph talks about the island of Hòn Lao. So what about the topography of the other islands?
• The third paragraph deals with the marshes. What about the other habitats?

• The biodiversity section does mention some other habitats, but it is all a bit listy.
• The only terrestrial animal mentioned is the swallow and that is mentioned in excessive detail.
• The history section is entirely about the Cham people and not about the Cu Lao Cham Marine Park itself.
• I will look at the Integrated management section later as I have other things I must attend to now. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:40, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Onhold

Nobody seems to be taking responsibility for this review so I am putting the review on hold for seven days. The main deficit is in Criteria 3a and 3b. The article is insufficiently broad in its coverage of the topic, but is too detailed in its approach to certain aspects, the swallows for example. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:54, 13 April 2019 (UTC)