Talk:DESY (particle accelerator)

Latest comment: 1 year ago by North8000 in topic Feedback from New Page Review process

Proposal for new article

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DESY (particle accelerator) is a proposal for a new article to correct, update and de-clutter the main article about DESY. The information about DESY’s individual accelerators have already been moved to their own pages (see for example PETRA or HERA.) However, a page about the DESY accelerator doesn't yet exist, so I suggest to create it using the information from the DESY article with new references and more precise infomrmation. Redactrice at DESY (talk) 09:56, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]Reply

  • beam-target needs a better link or omit the phrase.
  • is "Photon science" a thing?
  • I directly edited your draft as away of offering suggestions.
Johnjbarton (talk) 14:59, 19 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Johnjbarton Thanks! I reworded the reference to fixed target experiments.
I think photon science is also a thing outside DESY; see for example Argonne National Lab's Directorate for Photon Sciences or LLNL's Photon Science page Redactrice at DESY (talk) 10:56, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: good start

North8000 (talk) 02:59, 9 September 2023 (UTC)Reply