Talk:Da la Vuelta/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 02:21, 6 January 2020 (UTC)

I'll review this, comments should be added soon! Kingsif (talk) 02:21, 6 January 2020 (UTC)

Style

• Lead good length for article
• Well written throughout, with good tone and grammar
• Pass

Coverage

• Lead comprehensive
• The background is all about how he came to record an English-language album - the song is in Spanish and, while a promotional single for that album, there is definitely way too much coverage of the entire album process so much that I really thought text had been transplanted from the album article before I got close to the relevance.
• Music and lyrics is good
• Reception has good balance of detail and quotes
• Needs work

Illustration

• A few standard chart lists
• Album cover in infobox
• Fair use music clip
• Pass

Neutrality

• Seems fine
• Pass

Stability

• History looks clear
• Pass

Verifiability

• Sources look good
• Everything cited in line
• Pass

Copyright

• Check looks good
• Good rationale for use of song clip
• Pass Kingsif (talk) 00:34, 8 January 2020 (UTC)

Overall

•  On hold A good portion of the article is the outside coverage of the album's arguments, which can be cut down quite a bit. Kingsif (talk) 23:44, 13 January 2020 (UTC)

@Magiciandude: I don't think the notifications are being sent to your talkpage, so ping. Kingsif (talk) 23:45, 13 January 2020 (UTC)

@Kingsif: I'll get to work on this either this Thursday or Friday as I'm off work those two days. Erick (talk) 16:17, 14 January 2020 (UTC)

@Kingsif: I cut the background information and merged the release information with musical style section. Erick (talk) 20:31, 17 January 2020 (UTC)

@Magiciandude: That's great - I think the mention of being one of the three Spanish-language records included on Marc Anthony is sufficient background, but if some background is also added, that should be fine as long as relevant. Nice. Kingsif (talk) 22:56, 17 January 2020 (UTC)