Talk:David L. Englin
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Updated biographical and professional details, added citation links
editI updated the page to reflect Englin's current employment and occupation and minor biographical details, and added citation links to the official Virginia House of Delegates historical record as documentation on his committee service and educational background. [UPDATED for COI transparency: I am Shayna Englin.] Sbeinla (talk) 16:51, 14 January 2020 (UTC)
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Request edit on 14 January 2020
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In bio box add
Spouse: Shayna Beth Englin (m. 1996)
Rationale: We've been married since 1996 and it's a relevant piece of biographical information.
Citations:
- VA House of Delegates - House History - https://history.house.virginia.gov/members/8936
- David Englin; Virginia State Delegate; Democrat / About Shayna https://web.archive.org/web/20070821190809/http://www.davidenglin.org/index.asp?Type=B_BASIC&SEC={71E61A68-23DE-4A58-8093-05771B230328}
- David Englin; Virginia State Delegate; Democrat / What's In a Name https://web.archive.org/web/20070821190819/http://www.davidenglin.org/index.asp?Type=B_BASIC&SEC={572A4F6A-D9FA-43F6-8BAE-136BF8688E5A}
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In Personal Life section, add
Englin and his wife, Shayna, currently live and work in Los Angeles, California.
Rationale: Our current personal situation is relevant to a section on his personal life.
Citations:
- American Red Cross Los Angeles Senior Leadership / Regional Management Team (bio): https://www.redcross.org/local/california/los-angeles/about-us/leadership.html
- BizFed Institute Advisory Board: http://bizfedinstitute.org/advisory-board/
- Los Angeles Times Letter to the Editor: https://www.latimes.com/opinion/readersreact/la-le-0428-thursday-virginia-ex-felons-right-to-vote-20160428-story.html
- Shayna professional bio: https://42comms.com/about
- PR Week coverage of Shayna in LA: https://www.prweek.com/article/1420005/rally-brings-shayna-englin-principal
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Remove the Personal Life section entirely as without this additional information it contains no information not already referenced in the bio box.
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Add Legislative Awards section
Rationale: follows BPS standards for relevant information about legislative tenure
- Virginia League of Conservation Voters Legislative Hero, 2009 [1]
- Virginia League of Conservation Voters Legislative Hero, 2010 [2]
- Arlington Gay and Lesbian Alliance Equality Award, 2009 [3]
Sbeinla (talk) 00:54, 15 January 2020 (UTC)
References
- ^ Virginial League of Conservation Voters 2009 Conservation Scorecard https://valcv.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/04/2009_conservation_scorecard.pdf}.
{{cite web}}: Missing or empty|title=(help) - ^ Virginial League of Conservation Voters 2010 Conservation Scorecard http://valcv.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/04/2010_conservation_scorecard.pdf}.
{{cite web}}: Missing or empty|title=(help) - ^ AGLA Equality Award https://agla.org/equality-award/}.
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Reply 15-JAN-2020
edit
Edit request partially implemented
The |spouse=parameter was activated along with the appurtenant reference.- The Personal life section was previously removed by another editor.
The legislative awards were not added because the awards do not appear to be independently notable in Wikipedia.
Additional change made:
- The deprecated
|religion=parameter was omitted from the infobox.
Regards, Spintendo 08:04, 15 January 2020 (UTC)