Talk:Deafness in Thailand

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Matthall.research in topic Healthcare

About the missing Lead section

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This article is part of a WikiEdu project that is currently in progress. The Lead section will be added within a few weeks. Matthall.research (talk) 21:15, 6 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Language Emergence section

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No significant improvement since initial submission: score remains 2.5/3 Matthall.research (talk) 23:45, 29 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Significant Organizations section

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Nice improvement here, although it's still not clear which of these are Deaf-led. Score: 2.75/3 Matthall.research (talk) 23:53, 29 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Human/Civil Rights section

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No meaningful improvement: score remains 2/3. Matthall.research (talk) 23:57, 29 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Primary & Secondary Education

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Generally good content, but the final paragraph still lacks citations, which prevents me from giving this a higher score than 2/3. Matthall.research (talk) 00:01, 30 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Employment

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This section is great! Clearly organized, well-cited, providing both big-picture context and relevant details. Excellent work! Score: 3/3 Matthall.research (talk) 00:04, 30 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Healthcare

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The content you present here focuses on hearing technologies, as if you view deafness as the primary threat to DHH people's health. That's quite disconcerting to see at this point in the course! The goal of this section is to report on how DHH people manage to keep their whole selves (mind and body) healthy: how do they develop health literacy, communicate with healthcare providers, access information from public health authorities, etc. I'm afraid I can't give this anything higher than a 1/3. Matthall.research (talk) 00:08, 30 November 2022 (UTC)Reply