Talk:Delorentos/Archive 1

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I have returned old information that was lost when this article lost a deletion discussion before the band were deemed notable enough to be included. --Candlewicke Consortiums Limited 18:52, 10 May 2007 (UTC)Reply

Recent major additions by 194.125.159.193

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A large chunk of information was recently added to the article. Much of this was quite poorly written and some seems to have been plagiarized directly from promotional materials. Whilst some of the information is useful and valid, much of it is either far too detailed or simply irrelevant to an encyclopedic article. None of the information cites sources. For the time being I have tidied up the article for grammar, NPOV and style. I have also added {{fact}} tags to several statements. Over the next couple of days I will make some attempt to source whatever is easiest for me. After that I will start cutting anything that is not sourced and clearly relevant. DoktorDec (talk) 02:09, 8 January 2008 (UTC)Reply