Talk:Dil Se Di Dua... Saubhagyavati Bhava?

Latest comment: 12 years ago by JIP in topic Plot

Plot

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The plot section is a complete mess. Far too long and detailed, all running into a couple of paragraphs at the most, riddled with grammar, capitalisation and punctuation errors. I thought of trying to fix it, but then realised it would take me hours, and as I have never even seen this series, I couldn't be bothered. Surely this could be fixed up in some way? JIP | Talk 18:55, 26 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

The plot section looks better now, thanks to this edit by an anonymous user. It still looks somewhat like a detailed description of the entire show, but not nearly so much like a scene-by-scene recreation as it used to be, and most of the grammar, capitalisation and punctuation errors are gone too. Unfortunately I cannot make any factual changes to the plot summary myself, because as I have said, I have never seen the show myself, as we don't get Indian television here in Finland. JIP | Talk 18:17, 23 July 2012 (UTC)Reply