Talk:Dorothy Molter

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Material which I added was based on several first-hand visits by myself during the 1970's and early 1980's North8000 (talk) 22:25, 6 November 2009 (UTC)

Good 99.151.164.88 (talk) 00:02, 3 December 2009 (UTC)

I've been adding material. This is a transitional stage as it makes it a litle ragged until the text is reorganized / rewritten to fully integrate it. North8000 (talk) 10:32, 28 May 2010 (UTC)

Main references used extensively

I have been adding a large amount of material. While my visits with Dorothy developed a framework for absorbing. integrating and summarizing the material from the listed references, they (particularly the Cary book which had the largest amount of information) could be cited (and should be credited) for nearly every sentence in the article. Instead, I have been listing them them in general places, such as at the end of paragraphs. This is a work in progress, with significant work still required to get it into reasonably good shape. North8000 (talk) 12:07, 4 June 2010 (UTC)

Removed Cleanup Template

I removed the cleanup template. The article is still not perfect, but certainly meets the norm of articles without this template. North8000 (talk) 11:26, 23 July 2010 (UTC)

MOS fixes

I did some fixes per the manual of style. Most significantly, please note that when referring to a person, they should be referred to by full name the first time they're mentioned. After that, they should be referred to by last name only, without first names or apellations (so "Molter" rather than "Dorothy" or "Ms. Molter".) Seraphimblade ^{Talk to me} 20:26, 24 October 2010 (UTC)

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Humphrey or Mondale?

Going from memory from sources, I think that it was Humphrey that helped in the discussed effort. Somebody (who did a lot of good work) changed this to Mondale. The cited source does not mention either. We should check this. North8000 (talk) 11:29, 14 May 2019 (UTC)