Talk:Eli Manning/GA1

GA Review

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I'll start things off with a reference check. The following links need fixing, upon completion of this I'll proceed further:

• Ref #1 (nflplayers.com) is dead.
• Ref #30 (manning's shoulder) is dead.
• Ref #39 (giants dominate niners) is dead.
• Ref #61 (grounded eli) is dead.
• Ref #80 (Reebok) is dead.
• Ref #93 (cricket tournament) is dead.
• Ref #64 (AP 9/14) needs to be fixed.
• The following refs changed urls, update them to avoid future redlinks: 32 (giants stun redskins), 34 (umenyiora), 36 (giants rally), 41 (giants outlast dolphins), 57 (can't miss play), and 87 (president bush).
• The following refs are not properly formatted on-wiki or are missing information: 84 (NFL draft), 85 (national award), 92 (andrew mcgrew)

I'll give you a week on this stuff. Upon completion I'll review the article in full. Hopefully this is the bulk of the problems. Wizardman 00:33, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

Here's more I found:

• There's not much personal life wise. Being a Manning, it should be easy to find early life info and the like.
• Nothing in college is cited until the Senior Bowl note.
• 2004 NFL Draft is uncited.
• Personal life section should be prosified or meshed in with the article.
• 2008 playoffs are uncited.
• The 2007 season is formatted a lot differently than the other ones, and kinda throws me off.
• His playing in the 2004 season isn't discussed at all.

This is all fixable, yet upon conclusion of doing so, I think it would need to go through another GA nomination to find things I likely missed. As a result, I'm going to fail this. It's a nice article, but doesn't meet the criteria yet. Wizardman 17:10, 5 February 2009 (UTC)