Talk:Empedocles (The X-Files)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 14:40, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Review

Minor edits i made:

Plot

• "Jeb he sees a car chase" >> "Jeb witnesses a car chase"
• "the murders is related to" >> "the murders are related to"
• "through the head" >> "in the head"
• "when they discovered Luke’s body, Reyes and Doggett both saw the body transform into ashes momentarily." >> "both Reyes and Doggett saw it transform into ashes instantly."
• "convincing himself he did not see it" >> "convincing himself he did not saw it"
• "Doggett soon attacks Mulder for looking into his son's case, but Reyes soon shows up" Redundancy of "soon". >> "Doggett soon attacks Mulder for looking into his son's case, but then Reyes shows up"
• Other minor fixes. They're too many to note here.

—Hahc21 04:20, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Luke's murder was solved in "Release"---- Knowing there could be trouble if Luke ever told anyone about Regali's "business", Regali killed Luke. 24.156.65.45 (talk) 22:15, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

Verdict

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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—Hahc21 04:38, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

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