Talk:Eric Surkamp

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sanfranciscogiants17 in topic GA Review
Good articleEric Surkamp has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
April 22, 2022Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Eric Surkamp/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:56, 6 April 2022 (UTC)Reply


Lead

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  • Can you expand a bit on his pitching style in the lead? It just seems a bit short. Maybe add a fact about his fastball from the pitching style section? So it would look like: Surkamp batted and threw left-handed with his fastball averaging 89 miles per hour.
  • Can you WL Bachelor of Science?

Amateur career

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  • I feel this is a bit of a weird title since it discusses his birthday and who he admired growing up. Could this be retitled "Early life and amateur career" or is that too long?
  • Who are his parents?
  • He helped his high school win a state baseball title in 2004 [1]
  • Here are some newspaper articles about his HS career. It can definitely get expanded:
  • Please add (NC State) when the school is first mentioned as you use that short form in the personal life section.

Professional career

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Sanfranciscogiants17, thank you for your patience. I believe this is all for now. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:27, 20 April 2022 (UTC)Reply