Talk:Eric Surkamp/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sanfranciscogiants17 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:56, 6 April 2022 (UTC)Reply


Lead

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  • Can you expand a bit on his pitching style in the lead? It just seems a bit short. Maybe add a fact about his fastball from the pitching style section? So it would look like: Surkamp batted and threw left-handed with his fastball averaging 89 miles per hour.
  • Can you WL Bachelor of Science?

Amateur career

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  • I feel this is a bit of a weird title since it discusses his birthday and who he admired growing up. Could this be retitled "Early life and amateur career" or is that too long?
  • Who are his parents?
  • He helped his high school win a state baseball title in 2004 [1]
  • Here are some newspaper articles about his HS career. It can definitely get expanded:
  • Please add (NC State) when the school is first mentioned as you use that short form in the personal life section.

Professional career

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Sanfranciscogiants17, thank you for your patience. I believe this is all for now. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:27, 20 April 2022 (UTC)Reply