Talk:Esha Momeni
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editThe wording of this article appears to me to be biased against the government of Iran and its actions. I would suggest either rewriting the article, or consideration of deletion. Gilo1969 (talk) 19:07, 10 January 2009 (UTC)
I disagree. This article seems to bend over backwards to be fair to the government of Iran. In fact it my actually stray into the areas of political correctness or weasel words.Lowellt (talk) 01:03, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
- "Iran frequently arrests students and potential dissidents on bogus charges often without any motivation." - This sentence does not only lack any citation or source, standing on its own it is clearly biased depicting Iran as an undemocratic dictatorship. It really should be more balanced in tone, moreover, we need more facts and information in the article itself.--Kojozone (talk) 21:07, 27 June 2009 (UTC)
- Based on the rigged election and related events of late June 2009, it is hard to understand how to imagine Iran as other than an undemocratic dictatorship. However, the reference cited now leads only to a 404 error message, so it does not meet the policy on biographies of living persons. I have therefore deleted the controversial sentence and the defunct reference that supported it. I have also added several more pieces of updated information and relevant justifying links.EdH (talk) 18:25, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
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