Talk:FC Drita

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The article is written with multiple language problems. Some of them make it difficult to understand, and I am not a native speaker myself, which is why I cannot correct everything myself. Examples:

"Drita in the 1997/98 championship was great wherever in Kosovo and in many sporting games, the meetings started but it was difficult to name the fans." What is this supposed to mean? There was much support? Probably "everywhere" rather than "wherever" in Kosovo? What is "it was difficult to name the fans" supposed to mean? Why is the part about "the meetings started" needed? Are there any reliable sources for the statements?
What is meant with the statement that the players trained without food? Was it a period of starvation in Kosovo?
What is meant with "becoming the anxiety of all Kosovar teams, thanks to the players who brought in Gjilan, he contributed for 15 years with the full potential for Drita."? What does "the players who brought in Gjilan" mean"? Players from Gjilan? Players the manager brought to Gjilan? "He contributed with the full potential" is not encyclopedic style.
What is meant with "The Intellectuals are the biggest ultras group in Kosovo, with many transfers outside Gjilan."? "The Intellectuals" is the name of an ultra group that supports the club? They are also present outside of Gjilan?
"Derby according to the tradition of the city of Gjilan, the party starts with fans organization, who try to give the maximum that besides the support for the respective clubs, there is also some surprise for the other opponent camp, to say that we were better and is appreciated more than what is presented to you with great curiosity about the whole city, what a presentation will be on the weekend from Skifterat (Falcons) and Intelektualet (Intellectuals)." is unclear to me. What is "Derby according to the tradition of the city of Gjilan" supposed to mean? The match starts with something organized by the fans, like choreography? "We were better and is appreciated more than what is presented to you" is wrong grammar and inappropriate person for an encyclopedia. The ultras compete about who can present something better? Before the derbies the whole city is curious about what will be shown?

Crotopaxi (talk) 19:31, 29 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

The entire article reads like a blog post, not a wiki article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.1.130.154 (talk) 15:35, 23 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

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