Talk:Fifty Years of Freedom/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:36, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:36, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK.
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Link biography, pedagogue, Calvinist, sociological, infant, elementary, and secondary, state comprehensive schools, autobiography
• progressive school explain this a bit more.
• They largely praised its clarity but felt Hemmings's bias as a former teacher from the school. Reviewers appreciated the book's biographical detail and insight more than its philosophical contributions. Awkward, probably good idea to combine these two sentences.
• Hopkins himself saw Don't you mean Hemmings?
• Be consistent about using title case in the titles of your references.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:45, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

Sturmvogel 66, Czar, it's been over three weeks since the above review, and none of the issues raised so far have been addressed. Should this perhaps be put on hold with a deadline for improvements to made, or at least started? Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:16, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

I'd forgotten all about this one. I'll give the nominator a few days to start responding before I fail it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:00, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

@BlueMoonset, the GA bot didn't leave me a notification so I didn't even know this review was open, but thanks for the heads up

@Sturmvogel 66, thanks for the review! I think I've addressed your concerns, if you'll take another look czar 15:28, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

Looks good.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:37, 1 December 2015 (UTC)