Talk:Fran Foley/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 23:23, 27 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 16:59, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Expand lead.
• Link general manager in lead?
• in lead: "of the Minnesota Vikings" add of the National Football League (NFL)
• Remove ref from lead and add his birth year(s) to the body.
• "Foley grew up in Worcester, Massachusetts, and attended Worcester Academy where he played football" rearrange commas "Foley grew up in Worcester, Massachusetts and attended Worcester Academy, where he played football" also link football
• "He then played college football as an offensive tackle for the Framingham State Rams from 1980 to 1981, missing his last two years due to injury." that makes it looks like he missed his entire college career since only two years are listed
• "He was a member of the scout team" link
• Added cat: National Football League general managers
• "team reach the AFC Championship" link AFC Championship?

This article isn't super long but I don't think there's much else to say about this guy. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:59, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

  Nice work. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:32, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

• I did a spot check of the sources and didn't find any issues. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:54, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

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