Talk:Frank Jonet

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:48, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:48, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

• Link treasurer, accountant, fire and police commission, office manager, board of directors, non-profit, State Teacher's College
• a heart condition Don't use euphemisms like this
• introducing good business practices for the management of professional football Either enclose it in quotation marks or reword it--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:11, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Unless I am missing an article, there is no natural link for a combined fire and police commission. Otherwise all other comments were addressed Sturmvogel 66. Thanks for the review. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:29, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 19:55, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

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• ... that Frank Jonet was appointed as the financial receiver of the Green Bay Packers from 1933 to 1935, helping to prevent the team from going insolvent? Source: "Brown County Circuit Judge Henry Graass appointed Jonet receiver of the insolvent Green Bay Football Corporation on Aug. 13, 1933" and "But somehow, from the depths of that financial abyss, Jonet kept the team from folding over the next two years. Finally, two months after the court ordered Jonet to pay up or close up, the Packers emerged from receivership and reorganized in early 1935."
  • Reviewed: Bangiales and Jaroslav Záruba

Created by Gonzo fan2007 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:25, 13 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Frank Jonet; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

• Cited:
• Interesting:
• Other problems: - It's inconsistent to say he prevented them from going insolvent when the source says they were already insolvent: ...Brown County Circuit Judge Henry Graass appointed Jonet receiver of the insolvent Green Bay Football Corporation on Aug. 13, 1933 For the hook's wording, I believe that being bankrupt or insolvent does not necessarily mean that company has folded. Maybe change "going insolvent" to "shutting down"?

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I don't know if you want a quirky hook, but changing it to "appointed as the financial receiver" might pique interest from NFL fans. —Bagumba (talk) 11:26, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that Frank Jonet was appointed as the receiver of the Green Bay Packers from 1933 to 1935, helping to prevent the team from shutting down? Bagumba. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 13:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

Approve ALT1.—Bagumba (talk) 14:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

Quirky hook worked. Split end or flanker? Matthead (talk) 11:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)