Talk:Fremont and Elkhorn Valley Railroad

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 208.126.172.138 in topic Relocation of Cargill (CRGX) 316

Major overhaul

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Major overhaul done here for 'encyclopedic' style, as follows: 1)corrections to grammar & word flow, punct'n & spelling; 2)cut verbiage & repetitive phrases; 3)RE jargon or 'insider' info words: don't use 'em, OR.. if used, "explicate right away", e,g, I inserted "painted FEVR" after its first-mention as a phrase (>note here: I linked "Pullman" as "Pullman Car Company" >?correct?); >can someone 'explicate "Baldwin", "RPO"); 4)towns and small cities should be identified in their state; 5)cut non-encyclopedic details of event reporting, eg, "Fatality..", (getting close to legal issues/boundaries here); 6)this article badly needs source citations or references, >can anyone provide the correct name of the official minutes of meetings of the Museum? (these would contain most of the 'specific' data reported here.); 7) request all review for geographic (or any) facts changed-in-error.--Jbeans (talk) 11:05, 18 January 2010 (UTC)Reply

FEVR Flash

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The minutes are not published in whole but are summarized in the member newsletter the FEVR Flash, Professor Charles Sedlacek, editor. 137.48.134.10 (talk) 20:25, 28 July 2010 (UTC) JustAnonforNowReply

Relocation of Cargill (CRGX) 316

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Kind of an update the ex Cargill Whitcomb was bought by the Great Plains Transportation museum in Wichita Kansas back in April of 2023 208.126.172.138 (talk) 15:36, 17 July 2023 (UTC)Reply