Talk:French cruiser Lalande/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:28, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous  On hold

Comments

1.

• Consider linking reserve in the lead to Reserve fleet where you're talking about the ship status, not the specific fleet
  • Done
• "and she had provisions to carry up to 150 naval mines" - Maybe it's an English variant thing, but provisions seems really weird to me in this context
  • Switched to "capacity"

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• Add a short description
  • Doesn't Wikidata do that automatically? I confess I don't know much about Wikidata or short descriptions, though.
    • Wikidata item is under a different title and is not linked to this article. [1]. I'll go ahead and add it manually here.
• Consider adding alt text for the images. It's not a requirement for GA-status but helps with accessibility/screen readers and is often asked for in ACR and FAC.
  • Added one for the lead image, but I don't know what exactly is useful info for the map. Any ideas?
    • Not sure. Since it's not a requirement for GA, that can just be left alone. Hog Farm (talk) 19:20, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

That's it. This article is in really good shape. The two points under 7. aren't mandatory, but are things that would be helpful additions to the article. Hog Farm (talk) 20:30, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 16:20, 22 June 2020 (UTC)