Talk:French cruiser Lalande/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Hog Farm in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:28, 20 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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1. Prose   On hold

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous   On hold

Comments

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  • Consider linking reserve in the lead to Reserve fleet where you're talking about the ship status, not the specific fleet
    • Done
  • "and she had provisions to carry up to 150 naval mines" - Maybe it's an English variant thing, but provisions seems really weird to me in this context
    • Switched to "capacity"

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  • Add a short description
    • Doesn't Wikidata do that automatically? I confess I don't know much about Wikidata or short descriptions, though.
      • Wikidata item is under a different title and is not linked to this article. [1]. I'll go ahead and add it manually here.
  • Consider adding alt text for the images. It's not a requirement for GA-status but helps with accessibility/screen readers and is often asked for in ACR and FAC.
    • Added one for the lead image, but I don't know what exactly is useful info for the map. Any ideas?

That's it. This article is in really good shape. The two points under 7. aren't mandatory, but are things that would be helpful additions to the article. Hog Farm (talk) 20:30, 20 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 16:20, 22 June 2020 (UTC)Reply