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Redundancy
editThere is a lot of redundancy and repeating information. I tried to remove some of it. But still, editors should go through and check for these. DaltonCastle (talk) 21:10, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
Copy Edits
editAlso, I have done some major editing on this page for copy edits and would like to get the issue for copy editing removed. Please get some feedback or just continue to copy edit, so that this page can be cleared. DaltonCastle (talk) 21:12, 5 August 2012 (UTC)