Talk:Gerald Francis Clifford/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 07:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)

Let the review begin. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)

Lead

• We was an active trial lawyer <<=== He
• I don't think Prohibition should be capitalized since it isn't referring to the era.
• well known ===>>> well-known
• He is a member of The Hungry Five ===>>> He is one of The Hungry Five (I don't think "member" is correct since it's not a "real" group.)

Early life

• although he grew up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan. ===>>> but grew up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan.

Legal and political career

• Attorney General of Wisconsin <<<=== I don't think "attorney general" should be capitalized
• Same thing with capitalizing Prohibition.
• Is the "national Democratic party convention" the same as the "Democratic National Convention"?

Green Bay Packers

• His contributions over the next 20 years were so significant that he became part of The Hungry Five ===>>> His contributions over the next 20 years were so significant that he became recognized as one of The Hungry Five
• Link receivership
• He then helped draft and signed the Articles of Incorporation ===>>> He then helped draft and sign the Articles of Incorporation

Personal life

• Good.

Overall

• All of the links work.
• Well-cited.
• No dab links.
• No plagiarism detected.

Looks good. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:44, 2 July 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for another review Sportsfan77777! I made all the changes except the capitalization of Prohibition and Attorney General. For attorney general, when it is used as a formal title and position that was held, it should be capitalized (see Josh Kaul and List of Attorneys General of Wisconsin), whereas when it is used as a general term is it lowercase. For Prohibition, the link is to Prohibition in the United States. Since it is referencing a specific era and US government policy (and not just the word prohibition), it should capitalized. Let me know what you think. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:50, 2 July 2019 (UTC)

Passing, good work! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:37, 2 July 2019 (UTC)