Talk:German torpedo boat T23

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:46, 30 December 2018 (UTC)Reply


Little to nitpick here:

  • link English Channel
    • Linked in the lede
  • is the 4th Torpedo Boat Flotilla likely to be notable? If so, redlink. Same for 5th and 6th.
  • "as the German ships turned" could do with comma after it
  • is the 8th Destroyer Flotilla likely to be notable? If so, redlink. Same for 6th Destroyer Flotilla later.
  • Bremen is in italics, but shouldn't it be linked instead?
  • at the end of the first para of Subsequent activities it ends abruptly, and I am left wondering what the outcome was for the various ships that were damaged. Could some more material be added to summarise the outcomes?
    • The fate of T32 was the only one not explicitly covered and I've added a note for her.
  • "returned to transport 20,000" escort rather than transport? I assume she was not involved in transport that number?
  • a mention of the end of the war would be useful, as we are suddenly seeing her allocated to the British.
  • images seem ok.

That's me done. Placing on hold for the minor matters above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:18, 30 December 2018 (UTC)Reply