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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:40, 3 March 2021 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

I will review this for the GAN backlog and I am prepared to take on translation! --K. Peake 10:40, 3 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Thank you for the review! I believe I've done everything you've written below, with the exception of the one point I responded to. I hope you keep well, and look forward to the rest of your review. Please take as much time as you need. I wasn't expecting anyone to review it this soon, so there really is no rush. ;) Homeostasis07 (talk/contributions) 02:37, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • May 2014 – February 2016 → 2014 – 2016 because only the years are sourced
  • Remove venue parameter, as that is for live recordings only
  • Add recording studios to the infobox but avoid the word studio per Template:Infobox album
  • Name the two members of the duo in the first sentence
  • "first and only studio album issued" → "first and only album issued" to avoid repetitiveness
  • "The record contains production contributions" → "The album contains production contributions"
  • Change the "with whom" part to being "among others" instead, as it is notable for the lead that others helped with production, not some previous collab
  • The final release part is not directly mentioned anywhere in the body, plus remove lead singer introduction because it is in the body
  • "The album was recorded over" → "Good Karma was recorded over"
  • The Neverending World Tour should not be in speech marks per MOS:QUOTEMARKS
  • The tour beginning in 2009 is not mentioned anywhere in the body
  • "Good Karma is more electronic than" → "The album is more electronic than the duo's" with the target
  • "preceded the album by" → "preceded the release of Good Karma by"
  • "followed by official lead single" → "being followed by the lead single" with the wikilink
  • Target singles to Single (music)
  • "of eastern Europe, with the couple who created it receiving" → "of Eastern Europe; the couple who created it received"
  • "The record received mostly positive reviews upon release, with multiple publications" → "The album received mostly positive reviews from music critics, with a number of them" with the target
  • "It also performed well" → "The album also performed well"
  • "the Czech Republic and number two in Switzerland and" → "the Czech Republic, alongside reaching number two in Switzerland and" to avoid repetition of "and"
  • "since the 1990s in" → "since the 1990s in both"

Background and recording

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  • "The album features production contributions" → "Good Karma features production contributions"
  • "with whom the duo had" → "with whom Roxette had"
  • The "in order to retain control of the project" part is not properly sourced; maybe rewording accordingly to mentioning how they recorded in the studio after the duo?
  • "in the autumn of 2015," → "during the Autumn of 2015,"
  • "saying the band was" → "saying Roxette was"
  • Remove target on remixers and mention that they were working with them for Good Karma
  • Target single to Single (music)
  • "released on 6 November" → "released on 6 November 2015"
  • Wikilink music video
  • Reword the img text to being relevant to the article, plus wikilink the duo members
  • The source says he wanted it to sound like an updated album, unless my translator is faulty? If this is true, then reword and remove pop from genres; if false, then target pop to Pop music
  • "elaborating: "We wanted to" → "elaborating: "[W]e wanted to"
  • "towards the classic Roxette tradition,"" → "towards a classic Roxette tradition"," per the source and MOS:QUOTE
  • "more electronic than previous releases." → "more electronic than the duo's previous releases." with the target
  • "work on the album" → "work on it"
  • Introduce Marie Fredriksson as lead singer instead
  • The "set lists" part is not sourced, only that they performed the greatest hits for the tour
  • The Neverending World Tour should not be in speech marks per MOS:QUOTEMARKS; also, try to mention when the tour started around this point
  • "primarily of the duo's" → "primarily of Roxette's"
  • "The album was recorded over a" → "Good Karma was recorded over a" and reword to mentioning the two years was from 2014 to 2016 per the source, as that interview was in the latter year
  • "by the group's touring schedule." → "by the duo's touring schedule."
  • "contained re-recordings of previously unreleased tracks" → "made usage of old ideas" per the source
  • "on the lyric to" → "on the lyric"

Release and artwork

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  • "released on 18 May." → "released on 20 May." per the source, unless you can find another one stating elsewise
  • "for the album and its singles" – the source only references the album's cover artwork; plus wikilink imagery
  • "issued on multiple formats on 3 June,[15] including a limited edition translucent orange-coloured vinyl," → "released on 3 June 2016,[15] with a limited edition translucent orange-coloured vinyl being issued," with the target
  • "as the band's final" → "as Roxette's final"
  • The Neverending World Tour should not be in speech marks per MOS:QUOTEMARKS, plus mention the year this cancellation was
  • "Marie sent a thank you" → "Fredriksson sent a thank you"
  • Mention her "best album ever" quote per NME
  • "for this version of" → "for the original version of" to be specific
  • It is not sourced that Gessle specifically shared it, only Roxette themselves
  • Wikilink social media
  • "controversial in eastern Europe," → "controversial in their native Poland," per the source; fix this in the lead too
  • "on 4 November." → "on 4 November 2016." but the EP release is not mentioned like the lead says about
  • "and contained footage from" → "and contains footage from"
  • "received in their native Poland." → "received in Poland."

Critical reception

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  • "The album received mostly positive reviews." → "Good Karma was met with mostly positive reviews from music critics." with the target
  • Italicise Renowned for Sound
  • "they said contained" → "they said contains"
  • "... but also the ethereal" → "[...] but also features of the ethereal" for correct separation and that is what the quote really says
  • "echoes of Cocteau Twins)."" → "echoes of Cocteau Twins)"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "They complimented it for" → "The writer complimented it for"
  • Target pop to Pop music
  • "flag flying high."" → "flag flying high"."
  • Italicise Renowned for Sound and identify Brendon Veevers as being the one who gave the album a glowing review
  • "saying it contained some" → "saying it contains some"
  • "Cryptic Rock described it as" → "In Cryptic Rock, Alfie Vera Mella described the album as"
  • "the duo's thirtieth anniversary," → "the duo's 30th anniversary," per MOS:NUM, plus remove the star rating from prose due to the box showing it
  • Identify Tyler McLoughlan as being The Music reviewer
  • "German news site Mittelbayerische Zeitung rated" → "The staff of Mittelbayerische Zeitung rated"
  • Identify Kai Butterweck as being laut.de reviewer
  • "said "Good Karma isn't" → "said: "Good Karma isn't"
  • "nod to the past", elaborating: "Marie" → "nod to the past." He elaborated by stating that "Marie" because the former is a full sentence
  • "this, they said" → "this, Butterweck said,"
  • "the band "deliberately" → "the duo "deliberately"
  • Identify Nils Hansson as being Dagens Nyheter reviewer
  • Target electronic pop to Electropop
  • Target autotune to Auto-Tune
  • "and rave synths."" → "and rave synths"."
  • "They additionally complained Fredriksson" → "Hansson additionally complained Fredriksson"
  • Identify Jesper Robild as being Gaffa reviewer
  • "songwriting talent, and criticized" → "songwriting talent and criticized"
  • "they praised Fredriksson's performance, and said" → "he praised Fredriksson's performance and said"
  • Identify Hannah McKee as being Stuff reviewer
  • "was at times" → "is at times"
  • Add release year of "It Must Have Been Love" in brackets
  • "They described "April Clouds" as" → "She described "April Clouds" as"
  • "Although Göteborgs-Posten also" → "Although the staff of Göteborgs-Posten also"
  • "the album was best when" → "the album is best when"
  • Put some of this review into your own words since too much is currently quoted, plus cut down the amount the review focuses on "April Clouds"
  • "which dubbed it one" → "with Anders Nunstedt dubbing it one"
  • "would act as a "beautiful goodbye" should this be" → "acts as a "beautiful goodbye" if this is"

Commercial performance

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  • The Sweden info should be first since native countries always start this section, plus the Czech Republic will follow then Switzerland
  • Remove the "was a commercial success upon release" part
  • "debuting atop the Czech Albums Chart as their" → "debuted atop the Czech Albums Chart, standing as their" with the target
  • "The record peaked at number two" → "Good Karma peaked at number two"
  • You can move the Switzerland position to being after the Czech one by saying the album was also held off the top spot in the country by Seal the Deal & Let's Boogie without reintroducing the performer
  • "made the top ten in" → "made the top 10 in" per MOS:NUM
  • "Hungary, and Spain." → "Hungary and Spain."
  • "debuted at number eleven, making it their first" → "debuted at number 11, making it Roxette's first"
  • "their international breakthrough in 1989 to peak outside the top ten" → "their second studio album Look Sharp! (1988) in 1989 to peak outside the top 10" (it was released in 1988 but charted the next year)
  • Target German Albums Chart to GfK Entertainment charts
  • "It peaked even higher on the" → "It attained a higher peak position on the" for more neutral language
  • Target Scottish Albums Chart to Scottish Singles and Albums Charts
  • "where it debuted at number 44." → "debuting at number 44."
  • The highest placement since 1994 is unsourced, but you could mention it being their first studio album to chart since 2011

Track listing

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  • Invoke [17] after the lyrics and music sentence to verify this
  • See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Personnel

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Charts

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  • See MOS:TABLECAPTION

References

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  • Copyvio score looks very good at 27.0%!
  • Top job with the archiving here!
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 2 and target The Huffington Post to HuffPost
  • Cite Apple Music as publisher instead for refs 3 and 23, plus remove it from the titles
  • Remove Renowned For Sound from the title for ref 4
  • Cite Warner Music Group as publisher instead for ref 6
  • WP:OVERLINK of Renowned For Sound on refs 7 and 39, plus cite as work instead for the latter
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 10 and cite T-Online as publisher instead
  • MSN.com → MSN on ref 13, citing as publisher instead
  • WP:OVERLINK of Expressen on ref 14
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 18 and 30
  • WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 19
  • Authorlink Gavin Edwards (writer) on ref 21
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 24 and cite Warner Music Group as publisher instead
  • WP:OVERLINK of The Huffington Post on ref 25
  • Cite NaTemat.pl as publisher instead for refs 27 and 32, plus remove wikilink for the latter
  • Cite Interia as publisher instead for ref 33
  • WP:OVERLINK of Aftonbladet on ref 34
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 38 and remove laut.de from the title
  • Remove Stuff.co.nz from the title of ref 41 and cite Stuff as publisher instead
  • Add language parameter for refs 43 and 44

Final comments and verdict

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  • Homeostasis07 ✓ Pass now, great to have helped promote another GA during the backlog drive and I re-added "among others" to the lead because you must have accidentally removed that when getting rid of the previous collab info. --K. Peake 06:42, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
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