Talk:Graham Kernwein/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:58, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:46, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Lead needs expanded.
• "Early life and college"
• Where was Wenona High? Add it to the article. Also, the high school in the infobox should be formatted the new way I guess.
• Move full name to body with ref.
• Add college years to infobox.
• Addes cats: Chicago Maroons men's track and field athletes, Track and field athletes from Illinois, Pritzker School of Medicine alumni, American orthopedic surgeons, 20th-century surgeons, United States Army personnel of World War II, United States Army Medical Corps officers
• "He was "used considerably" by coach Amos Alonzo Stagg" put head coach?
• I think John Thomas in that quote is John Webster Thomas.
• "his specialty being the 220 meters" link?
• Nice pictures. They really liven up the article.
• Link fumble in that quote.
• "Kernwein with Racine." Remove period in caption.
• "According to coach Amos Alonzo Stagg" just put coach Stagg.
• Do you know if he was with the Bears during the regular season? Let's go ahead and add the asterisk to the infobox.
• I guess he didn't marry Dorothy?
• Is there a link for orthopedic surgeon?
• Link Army Medical Corps to United States Army Medical Corps.
• "American Medical Association" link
• "American Board of Surgery" link
• "American Board of Orthopedic Surgery" link
• Any details on how he died?

Amazing research. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 03:51, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: Updated the article – think I addressed everything. I also reorganized the one blockquote, which seemed a bit long. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:32, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

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