Talk:Guardium

Latest comment: 7 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

Please someone clean up/correct

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"the Guardium is equipped with the newest and most advanced technology out on the market. " - who judges that? That's very vague. From the sources it appears to have been selected in 2005 for IDF and operational with them since 2008 (8 years operational at the time of this post)

"Tele-Operated Mode" - it cites source number [7] . "Design of Advanced Tele-operated Control System for Unmanned Vehicle" which is a generic article about "Design of Advanced Tele-operated Control System for Unmanned Vehicle" and does not seem to mention the Guardium at all.

"Cameras" it this section it states: "They also have back up batteries to in cases where they need to run for 24 hours non-stop" and cites source [8] http://defense-update.com/products/g/guardium.htm which makes no reference of duration or of the above mentioned batteries

...all around this article needs either to have the source material properly referenced or some parts about it's capabilities reviewed. Parts of it read mostly like an advertisement or based of an advertisement rather then citing actual specifications. 2001:8A0:EC50:5801:C092:8B13:5A04:4458 (talk) 18:12, 13 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

Agreed, I added an advert header Danwroy (talk) 11:48, 21 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

NPOV

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"Both modes of operation make it possible for the Israeli soldiers to fight off any attacker without actually having to risk their lives while protecting their homes."

This is a wildly inaccurate, or at the very least, biased, description of what the Israeli army does to Palestinians. --130.63.110.250 (talk) 20:24, 18 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

I removed your NPOV. This is not the article to have this discussion. 115.66.154.34 (talk) 14:38, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

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