Talk:Héctor Garza/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:33, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 13:33, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "was a Mexican professional wrestler," Delink Mexican to avoid WP:SEAOFBLUE
• "better known by his ring name" - better: the
• "Garza also worked for several major US-based promotions" - the text highlighted in bold is reudndant
• Don't link United States per WP:OVERLINK
• "and the Mexican National Tag Team Championship as well as being inducted in the AAA Hall of Fame posthumously." - here's an improvement to avoid a continous run-on sentence: He was posthumously inducted into the AAA Hall of Fame.

Professional wrestling career

• "After being trained by his uncle Mario Segura, as well as Mr. Lince and Blue Fish," - and Mr. Lince and Blue Fish,
• "his first prominent storyline feud played out in 1993 as he was paired up with El Sanguinario " - just wording it as plain paired is all that is needed

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (1994–1996)

• "hired him to work on a national scale instead" - more concise: nationally
• "as part of CMLL's rebuilding after the split" - change to the text in bold to just a because it would confuse non-wrestling readers who know nothing about the split

AAA / World Wrestling Federation (1996–1997)

• "When Garza joined AAA he" - add a comma between "joined" and "he"
• "he was also able to work for the US based" - US-based
• "A the 1997 Royal Rumble pay-per-view" - A spelling error is present in this text and make it explicit it was a pay-per-view event
• "Garza teamed up with lucha libre legends" - please try to avoid wording such as "legends"
• "In AAA he often worked as part of a trio known as La Maquina del Amor ("The Love Machine") alongside Heavy Metal and Latin Lover as a trio" - reptition of the phrase "a trio" which should be avoided
• "All three members of La Maquina del Amor ended up qualifying" - qualified
• "which Lain Lover ended up winning." - won.

World Championship Wrestling (1997–1999)

• "which lead to many AAA workers" - typo; should be written as led
• "as he challenged Steven Regal for the WCW World Television Championship" - when is an more appropriate word to use in this case
• "In the fall of 1997 Garza scored a surprising victory over Scott Hall" - surprising according to whom?

AAA (1999–2004)

• "In the end Latin Lover defeated Garza" - You don't need the text highlighted in bold because it is redundant
• "On May 5, 2003, lost the Mexican National Heavyweight Championship to E; Zorro," - Shouldn't that say Garza lost that particular championship?

Total Non-Stop Action Wrestling (2004)

• Delink the United States per WP:OVERLINK
• "with Garza getting particularly good reactions from the crowd." - the text in bold is not particularly formal for a style on Wikipedia and should be reworded accordingly
• "In June, he jumped back to CMLL, claiming that AAA owner Antonio Peña owed him money for Garza's dates in TNA." - this sentences will needed a reliable source to support its claim
• Also, "jumped back to CMLL" would be better written formally as returned to CMLL
• In June, he returned to CMLL, claiming that AAA owner Antonio Peña owed him money for his TNA work." - this entire sentence is not attracted to a reliable citation and will require on. MWright96 (talk) 10:19, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
• "he helped Perro Aguayo Jr. turn heel" - what does turn heel mean? I'd prefer it to be re-worded to make it more understandable to non-wrestling readers
• The link to Canek is directed to the Maya Kings rank and not the wrestler El Canek
• "the AAA-TNA deal was dead so TNA decided to bring Garza back." - an improvement to avoid informal wording: was termiated and TNA elected to bring Garza back.
• "The push continued with a match against NWA World Heavyweight Champion Jeff Jarrett on TNA's weekly TV show." - this sentence is not referenced and will need a reliable source to verify it.

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2005–2011)

• "After being deported," - was he actually deported or not? If so what was the reason given?
• "In August, Pierroth Jr. was kicked out of the group" - ejected from
• "double hair vs. hair matchas the main event of the CMLL 72nd Anniversary Show." - as the main event
• "in the finals of a tournament" - which tournament was this?
• "In March 2010 signs of dissention amongst the team began showing as Garza walked out on the team" - left them
• "Following the walk out Garza kept insincerely" - Following this,

Los Invasores (2010)

• "Garza's third reign and Mr. Águila's first reign with the title." - eliminate the second mention of the word "reign"

Perros del Mal Producciones (2011–2012)

• Don't italize Triplemania XX

Personal life

• "Segura's son, Solano's cousin is known as "El Ninja Jr." - It is better to just mention that he is Solano's cousin?
• "while his nephew, Humberto Garza Solano, works under the ring name Garza Jr.." - and his nephew, Humberto Garza Solano, works under the ring name Garza Jr.
• "In 2005, Solano was set to wrestle Scott Hall at TNA's TNA Final Resolution 2005" - remove one of the two mentions of TNA to avoid the extreme close repetition of the same acronym
• "Garza would later sell T-shirts that read "If Pepe el Toro is innocent, so is Héctor Garza", alluding to the story of an old movie where a carpenter is incriminated on a murder and goes to jail where he finds the true assassins and fights with them and pops out the eye of the mastermind to make him confess "Pepe el Toro es inocente"." - This entire portion of text is unreferenced and requires a reliable source that verifies the information
• "alluding to the story of an old movie where a carpenter is incriminated on a murder and goes to jail" - 1950s film and is imprisoned respectively

Championships and accomplishments

• "PWI ranked him #19 of the 500 best singles wrestlers of the PWI 500 in 2004" - This statement is unreferenced and will require a reliable citation
• "International X Division Cup (2004)" - same issue as above

Footnotes

• The first, third and fourth notes lack a period to end the respective sentences
• You don't need to have an additional footnote to state where further information could be located as seen in other GAs. MWright96 (talk) 10:19, 25 November 2019 (UTC)

References

• What is the ISBN for the first reference? It would be benefical to have that information included
  • Just to ask, is there a ISBN number or not? MWright96 (talk) 10:19, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
• Reference 11 requires the date it was accessed
• Reference 19 is lacking the website that published the page
• References 15, 20, 22, 23, 29, 78 are missing the pages that cite the information it is attached to
• You've introduced a reference error with the ref name "PWI5002004" that will need to be addressed. MWright96 (talk) 10:19, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
• Reference 60 is lacking the author who wrote the article, the date it was published and the date it was accessed
• Reference 68 is missing the translation of the Spanish title to English
• Reference 71 does not have the date it was published and the date at which it was accessed for reference on Wikipedia
• Reference 85 is dead and needs to be archived

Overall there are some issues concering the grammar to the prose and to the verifiability of some of the content which does not have a reliable source attaced to it. Another big issue is the lack of parts for some of the references of which one of the online citations I found was dead. As most of the issues seem like quick fixes, I will put the review on hold until all of the fixes have been adressed accordingly. Feel free to comment in this review which ones you've gone through and if you have any additional comments on any of the queries above. MWright96 (talk) 19:35, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

• MWright96 thank you for your thorough feedback, I believe I have addressed all of them, please let me know if there is anything left, or anything else that needs to be addressed. MPJ-DK (talk) 23:27, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
  • @MPJ-DK: Have added some more queries to ponder about above. MWright96 (talk) 10:19, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
    • MWright96 - I removed the note and fixed the reference error. Iw ill find a source for leaving AAA. As for the ISBN, this is from a magazine I've got packed away so I'll have to see if I can find it to get the ISBN for that issue. MPJ-DK (talk) 15:20, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
    • MWright96 - In case you did not see that I have addressed all concerns I think. MPJ-DK (talk) 19:40, 11 December 2019 (UTC)
      • @MPJ-DK: The claim about Antonio Pena owing Garza money in the first paragraph of the Total Nonstop Action Wrestling (2004) is not reference and will require a reliable citation to verify it, MWright96 (talk) 20:18, 11 December 2019 (UTC)
        • MWright96 I forgot to remove that, I have only been able to find that in a blog that is not reliable. So I took it out and sourced that he startd working for CMLL in 2004. That should address the issue I hope. MPJ-DK (talk) 20:30, 11 December 2019 (UTC)
          • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting. MWright96 (talk) 21:02, 11 December 2019 (UTC)