Talk:HMS Colossus (1910)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:17, 5 March 2017 (UTC)

This article is in pretty good shape.

• In the lead, which battle?
• The displacement in the text and infobox doesn't match.
• link shp in text
• link Port and starboard
• probably worth specifying that the secondary guns were in single mounts
• After introducing BS as an abbreviation, suggest referring to 1st BS and subsequent mentions of BS
• link Home Fleet at first mention
• suggest linking mobilisation
• link dreadnought at sixteen dreadnoughts
• 1900 should be 19:00
• The sentence beginning During the battle has a repetition of "during the battle"
• suggest and was refitted to suit her new role
• suggest and she returned to Devonport where she was again listed for disposal
• images are all appropriately licensed and captioned.

That's me done. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:33, 5 March 2017 (UTC)

• Thanks for catching these mistakes. I'll wait on your responses in the Hercules review on the dreadnought and Home Fleet links before doing anything here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:40, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
  • I always think it is worth linking at first mention in the body, but it's not a requirement, so I'm ok either way. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:57, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by appropriately license images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:06, 9 March 2017 (UTC)